Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Claire's Fairytale Etude


3 comments:

  1. I really like the form you are using, Edwards. The middle column with the house/home vocab acts as a pivot from which you can read each column.

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  2. THANKS DOC JENKINS

    just so everyone knows, for me the second page comes first

    not necessarily necessary, but JUST IF YOU WERE WONDERING

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  3. Claire I love the tension in it, and actually (don't have a heart attack, Dr. J) really thought the breaks in the poem helped to draw that tension out.

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